Comin' to the Rescue 5th Edition Compiled

Main Story

 

Part01~ 501 _  part01ver505

Part02~ 501 _ 502 _ part02ver505

Part03~ 504 _ 505 _ part03ver506

Part04~ 510 _ part04ver511

Part05~ 501 _ part05ver503

Part06~ 505 _ part06ver506

Part07~ 510 _ part07ver511

Part08~ 500 _ part08ver503

Part09~ 500 _ 505 _ part09ver506

Part10~ 500 _ part10ver502

Part11~ 500 _ 503 _ part11ver506

 

For now all the story is compiled here. This post will continually be updated as things get re-edited and fixed. Please enjoy the 18 year worth of effort or something. And get a doughnut while you're at it.

 

Bonus

 

Part12 Q&A ~ 12ver511

Part13 Bonus story ~ 500 _ part13ver501

Part14 Bonus story ~ part14ver501

Part15 Bonus story ... hopefully

This is the bonus parts. Some are stories, few are commentaries, and there may be other needless info for the series.

Comin' to the Rescue 5th Part 11

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Part11TheFinal

 

It is done. I want to thank all of you who have been reading the story. It has been a long 18 years, and I have finally fulfilled my wish and therefore this page will be granted a Ultimate Dream tag. The story may not be touched for a long time, or it may have more edits or even a bonus chapter, but I should compile all of the done files in a new page.

Maybe the next question will be, what will I make next? I do have more stories in the back of my head that needs to be materialized out. i used to make music a bit, so that's also a possibility. But first I will draw a color illustration for this story.

That being said, The other question will be, what about this blog? I haven't posted things regularly, but things are worse off now. The site can come to a permanent halt at this point, and blogs are not a thing since forever, I should have known.

In case if it does, I would like to thank all who have been enjoying the stuff here. Really. Thank you. That is all I can say. I hope it won't be a goodbye, but none can guarantee the future. For now, I will smile a bit.

 

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Comin to Rescue Fifth #10

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CttR5th Part10

Part 11 may be the last. I want to thank all of you who may have read and waited patiently all this time. I think it's halfway done, and once it does, I can finally finish what I started, like over 15 years back.

All of the older parts are still getting updated and changed. Once part 11 is done, I will pile that and the other parts up in one post or a new page somewhere. ... Finally, I will be free. But I will still come back from time to time and may add a few new things.

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Comin' to the Rescue Fifth #9

Work in progress ...

 

CttR5th Part 9

 also WIP ...

UPDATE 2022/02/10

Comin5th PART9 done

 

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Comin to the Rescue part 8

CominFifth Part8 Unfinished

This it unfinished, but I posted it because it was taking so long. Return for future updates.

Update 2021/08/27

CominFifth Part8 500 Done

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Comin to the Rescue Part 7

 Probably mentioned it a few times already, but this is a remake story in progress. Some parts may be altered, added, or replaced entirely in time.

CTtR5th Part7

Update 2021/02/19

FifthVer 510

 

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Comin To The Rescue Fifth Edition Part 1 to 6

Here's the awaited updated story with hopefully better grammar, spelling, buried plot holes, and smoother story flow.

... Enjoy.

Part 01-ver501

Part 02-ver501

Part 03-ver504

Part 04-ver501

Part 05-ver501

Part 06-ver501

 

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Comin to Rescue Fifth part6

Comin' to the Rescue Fifth Edition - Part 6

There may be updates. No, there's definitely has to be one, because this story very likely have a bunch of spelling errors and whatnot.


2020/06/26 UPDATE

Updated nao!
http://the-hatrixx.blogspot.com/2020/06/comin-to-rescue-fifth-edition-part-1-to.html 

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Comin to Rescue Fifth part5

It's finally up.
If you want to proofread and stuff, that's good.

Part 5

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Comin to the Rescue! Fifth Retake textfile4

Don't worry. I didn't skip part3. Well this is the third post, but 3 is on second post and the first 2 is on first post.

!!!! Part 4 LINK !!!!

 

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Comin' to the Rescue! Fifth Retake 02

 

↓Part 3↓ ...you know, in case you might miss it.

Part 3

 

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Comin' to the Rescue! Fifth Retake

AndersonT : For some unknown reason, I decided to remake the infamous novel A New Tale of Toby Coreman Episode 3. For those who want a recap or a summary, you can use the Dōa-nu'tz tag to browse through all those nice abyss black history.
So to sum it up it's basically

• First original version. Written on scraps. Undeniably crappy everything.
• Second Brown notebook version. Enhanced, added fillers, and richer story.
• Third Microsoft Word version. Great improvements in sentence structure Compared to the first version. (its actually still terrible) And more extensions but story couldn't go farther than 2nd version.
• Fourth version but it's more like 3.5. Mainly spelling and grammar fixes. Typed out all the unreached 2nd version, and a brief after story and spoilers.

And this is the fifth version. In this version I would like to do a few things

• Update the whole Dōa-nu'tz lore. That means changing lots of names, and even parts of stories to make it match with other newer stories.
• Over enhancing the scenarios. Some places simply needs more description because they are not pictures. And even then I won't do justice compared to pro writers.
• Deep characters. In order to make a deep story, you need deep characters! What I should do is, just get a very basic idea, and from there, branch out details. For example, throw in a character in some situation. What will he do and why. bring two characters, and imagine what will happen. Be creative and combine everything to anything. You don't make characters story! Characters make your story! ... maybe
• The whole plot. Actually it's too late at this point. Change the story, and the Dōa-nu'tz won't be a Dōa-nu'tz. At least the deep characters can fill some plot holes.
• Actually END THE STORY all the way to the end. No further explanation needed.

Okay I let you wait too long. Here's the part 1. Hopefully more will come. Part 2 is currently underway.

Part1
Update 2018/03/04 Part2
 Chapter numbers are in a bit of mess. Stay not so tuned for updates and fixes

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The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #04

Mission of 1999

Anderson.T : Surprisingly, we never mentioned that other story. It's basically have the opening clone of the first Dōa-nu'tz story. And then that same overcrowding friends, new places, sneaking inside enemy territories, and of course we can't forget that fencing at a needlessly large room.
Yes, it really is a clone of Dōa-nu'tz episode1. It could have been around 2007 when I decided to draw this really long story. It became shorter than I hoped, and by the time I finished, I didn't have the enthusiasm like I should have. So story and quality is pretty much trash.

Goose : Actually that comic we've released, Revolt of Van-Haydez, was based on this story. It was a bit after this when Anderson was more serious at creating a proper plot.
Anderson.T : A little too late I know, so that's one reason why I didn't want to post all that comic and everything. But what done is done. I won't post all this comic for now, but I will show you the rework of this story. Well, it's more of a draft.

Mission1999Draft

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #03a

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #03a

ドーナッツ記　第3章その一

Anderson.T : Now, I can finally talk about the third series of this Dōa-nu'tz thing. Unlike the other first two story, it's not a comic. Yes it's a book instead, for some reason. The bottom left scraps
are the first edition(2006?). It has some few pictures and this overly unplanned story line. ... Well not exactly, you know something will happen in the end. Anyway that brown ring binder book is the second edition (2009?) with no pictures, more story, and better everything overall.
 

Actually, I did try to make the comic version. Twice. Of course It's not done. But more importantly, there is a third edition all nicely typed down in my first old laptop. And yet for all this time, I couldn't finish it again!
So finally, two years ago I made this 'unofficial (despite being my story) fourth edition', which is only grammar fixes and editing pats of scenarios that contradicts each other. But the main thing about it is the REST of the story. Just roughly, but nevertheless, I just finished it!
Want it?! Here it is!!

TobyIII
AfterTale

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #02b

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #02b

ドーナッツ記　第2章その二

Anderson.T : So the map. Yes. It was about an unknown continent in the far east or west, I'm not sure. The lands there were said to be a myth, but as we expect, the group goes there, and of course there is a unknown continent. In this story the place is called New World. 'New' as in new for the people not in the New World. The place is just as old as any other place, and simply was just not known.

Okay, so then the heroes rode on their size-infinite morphing wagon and sailed west. There's not much to talk about this episode except that they

• meet kings and have a feast
• boat travel!  what?  fine, Ship Travel!
• look at old ruins
• travel to the capital and had a high tensioned chase with monsters
• joined a 'Macho Contest' (surprisingly Tom and his gang were there)
• more feast
• shopping
• tunnel digging

Well in time, the new evil empire led by BG some how got hold of the information about the New World. (probably from Tom (but how Tom got to the New World is not known)) They made an attempt to capture the heroes. They foiled once, and succeeded the second time.

Do I really have to tell you the rest of the story? Plainly it's a clone from the first episode. Everyone jailbreaks, chaos, shootings, fencing at an unnecessary large room. Oh wait, Sue falls from a aircraft, ... but of course she comes back.

A lot of details aren't clear, detailed, unexplained, and literally holey. The reason? you guessed it; I was only 11. 12 at best. ... That explains everything, doesn't it? Now even I'm not sure what the story means, but next time I'll try to explain you, and hopefully, show you the third episode of this series.

 

 

 

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #02a

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #02a

ドーナッツ記　第2章その一

 

 

Anderson.T : Once I finished that first story I quickly came up with an sequel. Shorter and less adventurous, personally speaking. ... Sorry about the quality, it's, um, 'cameraed' not scanned so it's all dark and fuzzy. If all of you are desperate for a higher quality, try commenting below. not that I will post quickly ...

Anyway the story starts right after when the previous heroes builds up a cafe. Some mysterious guy strode inside the large room where Toby (M-guy) and the last boss had this petty skirmish. As you can see in the picture, the mystery guy is BG, of course. He took the emperor's cloak and becomes the new emperor! Oh no (monotone)! Well obviously BG will have his nice revenge on the heroes. And so off they have to leave. In a miserable cave

Then there's this girl called Sue who came and join the ever-growing band of good guys. She ended becoming a caretaker for Goose and Molly. Yes. she has no hair like the rest of them. I didn't know how to dray a girl, much less the courage to. Not until 2008 December when I started the Revolt of Van-Haydez comic. I was wondering it's about time to actually post the comic itself.

Right. Okay there's this skeleton in that cave, and it doesn't have a purpose for the story. ... but then, what does? ......... Never mind, but those bones came with a map that does make a proper plot. I should talk later. until then!

Goose : TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTH!!

Molly : TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTH!!

Toose : Uh, what? said something?

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #01b

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #01b

ドーナッツ記　第1章下

Anderson.T : Right, so Toby (Main Guy) and his friends splits up into two teams; Toby and Edison (Metal smith), and Bob (Friend) and Goose. The Toby team did quite a fair job of finding the secret base of evil, meanwhile Bob team was just herp-derping and ended up in the Ultra Race 'starting in three days after' according to the original story.

Yes this is the beginning of the well known Ultra Race comic I've shown you years back.

http://the-hatrixx.blogspot.jp/2011/06/ultra-race-1-4.html

 

 

Anyway the two teams rejoin and face the emperor, and Toby throws a big fencing competition at an unnecessarily large room. Of course Toby wins. There's obviously a reason why he has a big M on his shirt, just to make a story less exciting. After the battle was won, the friends decided they will open a nice little doughnut cafe and put BG to shame. Oh, guess who was the emperor's right hand black knight? Toby's father ... of all things.
Yes, there's a part 2 for this  series as well! And a part 3! And a 4! and and a 5! ... no only up to 3, but I really was thinking of 4 and 5 back then. I hope you like this series, there will be more of these, and hopefully more old pictures I haven't shown you.

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #01

The Dōa-nu'tz Chronicles #01
ドーナッツ記　第1章

Anderson.T : Somehow I kept forgetting to type these Dōa-nu'tz dedication series for all of you. Now I'm like 4 months late from my schedule. So now, I will tell you about the First Dōa-nu'tz ever. .... wait I already did quite a few times. Still I think i hadn't told you the basic story yet, I think. I'll make it short and easy for you.

So there's this guy with a big "M" on his shirt. "M" stands for Main guy. This guy decided he will get donuts with his life saving. Yes. A bill. Then this shop guy cheated the main guy and gave him a empty bag with a nice extra fly in it. "BG" stands for Bad Guy, if you're wondering.

Later on main guy found out his Friend was cheated by the same guy as well. And so the revenge mach was made between the two guys and the store owner. Somehow the story drastically sidetracks when the two meets a duck at a secret underground hideout.

Immediately Ducky (Duckey at newer series) give these two guys a mission to save the world from this StarWars imitated cloaked emperor, his black armored right hand man, and the dominating empire.

Out of nowhere, Goose arrives, and more friends! Crown the woodpecker, Edison the metal smith, Ellion the younger brother of Edison, Molly Ellion's pet, Tom ... no wait. He's a rival.

Anyway, Maybe I should stop here for now. I'll continue the story next time. A bit of research might help me, perhaps. At least make me more enthusiastic with my posting.

The Goose File #06

The Goose File #06

グースのプロファイル＃06

The Legacy of Goose - Part 2

 2008-9? Happy Hour

 2008-9? More Happy Hour

2008-9? Concept art from one of Anderson's old stories back in 2008

A new tale of Toby Coreman III - Coming to the Rescue

Thompson.A : It was meant to be a novel. The first edition (known as Dōa-nu’tz III)was written back in 2005 or so, and it was quickly canceled, ... as usual. A few years the story was revived with two attempts of a comic version, and a novel with a remade scenario. The story was quite different from the first edition. Soon a third edition was all neatly typed up in Microsoft Word, based on a second edition with a bit more detail. In time, all this came to a stop as well.

Finally this year, I had enough with the unfinished mess, and so I took the time to type the base event of the rest of the story which I never written down. It was done (some what), and all the spoilers are recorded as well. ... And I haven't even took the time to tell you about Episode 1 and 2 for this series.

 2008-9? Yet More Happy Hour

The Goose File #05

The Goose File #05

グースのプロファイル＃05

The Legacy of Goose - Part 1

2004

2004-5?

 2006-7?

 2008

Anderson.T : Did I ever told you, the character, Goose, was resulted from a quick eye drawing? First I drew all the heads, then later added the eyes. Apparently I was getting impatient, and was soon randomly poking all over their faces. (first picture (2004), top left)

It was then, one of my friends pointed out that one guy had four eyes. We soon redrew the guy into a goose, ... of all things.

Goose : Wawawawa!?!

Anderson.T : Anyway, back then I never had the habit of recording the exact date of most of my pictures, so even the year is not precise. Some few more pics coming later.